'Mary Sue' Test.

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James for lols.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon Not currently, but it's happened. Maybe this should count as half a mark...
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour So much on eyes :/
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular ...no. He has well toned muscles but it's not incredibly muscular. *is thinking of a wrestler or something* >.>
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender LOL. HE MAKES HIMSELF. I think if he can convince someone to fall for him even though his goal is to kill their best friend, that makes him pretty skilled. =w=;;
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers He has many awesome objects and weapons but he has to use his own skills to use 'em right.
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents Both. *sobsob*
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death I'm going to tick this cause he witnessed another one of his family member's deaths.
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender LOL HE LIKES TO JOKE ABOUT IT. x'D
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends Not many friends. He's a loner by profession. He has contacts but he rarely sees them. :U
[ ] They are emo/cutesy Lol he had depression at one point but he pulled through. >w>
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship Hahaha...I really don't know whether to tick that box or not. TwT
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. I think he only states his morals on vamps and murdering so regularly because he argues a lot with a certain Missy. xD On a regular basis he wouldn't.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder Had.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane He deals by seducing chicks. TwT;;
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent Not book wise. But he's quick witted and relitively good at outsmarting enemies. But he says stupid stuff sometimes and gets himself into trouble -3-
[ ] They have hallucinations No. But he used to have really vivid dreams~
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet He'd like a dog but he couldn't afford to keep it. Poor Jamesy -w-
[ ] They have a guardian spirit LOL HE WISHES.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts ...not as a skill, but he has said stuff like "Bitch plz" to lots before exorcising them >.>
[ ] Some part of their body glows WTF? XD;;
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name NO HE DOESN'T THAT'S THE PROBLEM, HIS NAME KEEPS POPPING UP EVERYWHERE XD;;;;;;
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label' Lol he has like, three of each clothing piece and that's it.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives In a van...does that count? He has no "home"
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood PSSH
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown He gets anxious about one particular person, but it's not triggered by something, no.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia PFFT NO BUT SOMEONE ELSE DOES >w>;;;;
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points:
7

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Final Score is: 7

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
Woohoo! Jamesy's a well balanced and interesting character! xD;;

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?

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:XD: that made me lawlz